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--- yang-anna [2021/06/22 20:01] – zoey.lin
+++ yang-anna [2021/06/28 19:37] (current) – renick
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-I past experiences about animals was I have a cat and I will go to park and feed dogs and I have go to RuiFang to be staff for one day.
+The past experiences I have had with animals was I have a cat and I will go to a park and feed dogs I went to RuiFang to be a staff for one day.
 I think animal welfare is good but the government must achieve it.
 I learned that when a dog growls, it means he doesn’t like it.
-Making a water feeder let me learn how to do it and how it works and the process made me happy because we can discuss how to make it and do it for ourselves.
+I learned how to make a water dispenser and how it works. This process made me happy because we can discuss how to make it and do it for ourselves.
-I think a questionnaire is a good experience and can increase courage when we ask some people we don't know.
+I think the questionnaire was a good experience because it can encourage you to talk to people you don't know.
 我過去關於動物的經歷是我有一隻貓，我會去公園餵狗，我有去瑞芳當一天的員工。
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 ===Something I would like to say to people about helping homeless animals.===
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-===== my work =====
+=== my work ===
   * 3D Dogs 3D狗繪製