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--- adopt-yoda [2021/06/24 22:51] – shannia.lin
+++ adopt-yoda [2021/06/25 00:35] (current) – shannia.lin
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 ====== Hi, I'm Yoda! Adopt me! ======
-**dog number:**2018051003
+**dog number:** 2018051003
 represented by [[:shannia-lin|Shannia Lin]] and [[:yuna-wu|Yuna Wu]]
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-This is Yoda, she’s been in the shelter for around 4 years. She’s been in fights with other dogs because of this she has some scars on her head and tail. However, she’s still a very affectionate and cuddly dog. She’s a very active dog and loves to run. She can run very fast and she doesn’t mind getting close to people. She likes to let people pet her. Yoda is a heavy dog, but she doesn't eat a lot. If you adopt Yoda, she will make your life more interesting!
+This is Yoda, she’s been in the shelter for over 4 years. She is a medium-sized and a mixed-breed dog. She’s been in fights with other dogs because of this she has some scars on her head and tail. However, she’s still a very affectionate and cuddly dog. She’s a very active dog and loves to run. She can run very fast and she doesn’t mind getting close to people. She likes to let people pet her. Yoda is a heavy dog, but she doesn't eat a lot. If you adopt Yoda, she will make your life more interesting!
-她是Yoda，她已經在收容所里呆了大約 4 年了。 她之前有跟其他狗狗打架，所有她的頭和尾巴上有一些傷疤。 然而，她仍然是一隻非常深情和可愛的狗狗。 她是一隻非常活潑的狗狗，喜歡跑步。 她可以跑得很快，而且她非常親近人。 她喜歡讓人摸她。Yoda 是一隻健康的狗狗，但是它吃不了太多的東西。 如果你領養了Yoda， 她會讓你的生活變得更有趣的!
+她是Yoda，她已經在收容所里呆了超過 4 年了。她是一隻中型犬，是一隻混血的狗狗。她之前有跟其他狗狗打架，所有她的頭和尾巴上有一些傷疤。 然而，她仍然是一隻非常深情和可愛的狗狗。 她是一隻非常活潑的狗狗，喜歡跑步。 她可以跑得很快，而且她非常親近人。 她喜歡讓人摸她。Yoda 是一隻健康的狗狗，但是它吃不了太多的東西。 如果你領養了Yoda， 她會讓你的生活變得更有趣的!
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