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 ====== Writing ======
-by [[daniel-chen|Daniel cheb]]
+by [[daniel-chen|Daniel chen]]
-====== chapter 1 ======
-John Lin, a 16-year-old high school student, lives in a humble neighborhood in Beitou with his single mother. He has an older brother who wants to be a soldier and attends an __army college__ in Kaohsiung, and an older sister who uses her scholarship to study in Germany. John's mother works at a clothes business close to Beitou Market, and her pay barely covers his necessities.
-When John started high school, he saw that everyone around him was using computers to play video games. Since he liked playing video games as well, he decided to take advantage of his birthday to get a gaming laptop. "Do you think I could make my own gaming laptop, Mom?" "No, you can't. Your job is to be a student, so you should focus on learning. Also, gaming laptops are not __cheap__ they cost too much money, so we can't spend money on unnecessary things," John's mother said. John is determined to persevere, even though he anticipated her saying it.
+[[daniel-chen-1|Chapter 1]]
-John began pleading with his mother, cleaning his room, and doing extra housework in an attempt to persuade her to change her mind. __However__, none of these strategies succeeded, and eventually his mother could take no more. "Okay, you can build your own gaming laptop, but I will only give you half the money. You should make money yourself. Also, you need to get 100 on your math and __physics__ test, and other tests should be over 80, and the TOEIC test score needs to be over 600. Is that okay?" was the last thing his mother said to John. John instantly agreed, and ever since then, his schedule has become increasingly hectic.
+[[daniel-chen-2|Chapter 2]]
-====== chapter 2 ======
+[[daniel-chen-3|Chapter 3]]
-Time flies so fast and in a blink of an eye, the final exam is coming, After weeks of practicing in the library, The day of the test arrived, and John felt nervous but confident; he had given it his all during the test. When the teacher handed back the graded tests, John's heart raced Finally, he flipped his exam papers over to see his score, It was 76.
-When he got home, John's mom noticed there's something different about him. “What's wrong, John?” she asked with concern. “I got a 76 on my math test,” John replied, feeling a bit defeated. His mom's eyes widened in surprise. “A 76? But you studied so hard! How did that happen?” She yelled, and John shrugged, feeling a bit defensive. “What's wrong? How did you get so low?” “It's not low,” he retorted, “your sister got 90 for every test! You're banned from using computers for one month!” “What?” He held his head and looked at his mother in surprise. “My score is above average!” He shakes his head, goes back to his room, and locks the door.
+[[daniel-chen-4|Chapter 4]]
-After a few minutes, he calmed down and, knowing that he needed evidence to let his mother believe in him, asked his teacher to give him an average score on the test and also some of the good student's scores to convince his mother. But when he tried to show her the average scores and the performance of other students, she refused to budge. She anchored her judgment on his sister's high scores and couldn't see past them. It frustrated John to no end. John didn't give up. He had to make his mom understand his effort and perspective. It would take time, but he would prove himself.
+[[daniel-chen-5|Chapter 5]]
+[[daniel-chen-6|Chapter 6]]
+[[daniel-chen-7|Chapter 7]]
+[[daniel-chen-8|Chapter 8]]
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